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Re: Intricate Fire

by boson boss <junkerade@[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Jun 23, 2007 at 01:59 AM

On Jun 22, 10:36 am, - <ilya_shambat2...@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote:
> The mind empowered with desire -
> The heart upon a dragon's back ->From depths of hell, Intricate Fire
>
> Spring into life! And don't look back!
>
> Through caves, through shafts, and through volcanos -
> Into the clouds in ruby plumes -
> Through things both exquisite and heinous -
> Intricate fire to burn presumes.
>
> What is your source? Who is your ruler?
> Upon which start and to what end?
> Reasoned from what, and in what manner?
> Through context, based on which intent?
>
> In forest, wildfire without pity;
> Midst people, the electric light -
> Moderate doses light a city;
> Extremes burn holes in the night -
>
> What will you char? What will you nourish?
> And what transfigure, into whom?
> What will in warmth you give off flourish?
> What will be in your heat consumed?
>
> Sma****ng through crust, and into air -
> And with that feat of passion done
> Springing past construct and despair -
> But what is closer to the sun?
>
> Crust breaks, that fire might meet the surface
> And show what is that made the earth;
> And then beyond, there is the cosmos,
> That gave both earth and fire its birth!
>
> And then beyond, galactic matter
> And then - more, more, and endlessly
> Simplicity complexly scattered
>
> >From simply hewn complexity:
>
> Quasars, black holes, energized darkness,
> The sugar in the Milky Way
> Particle-waves, relative timespace
> Between the galilean frames -
>
> But do not pause yet on your journey!
> So much to see, so much to be!
> Abyss of stars appear before you
> And in them - blended - destiny:
>
> To meet the sky, and like a comet
> To blaze the path around the sun
> Through Milky Way and out beyond it
> And through it, out into the One!
>
> Or two! Or three! Or the forever
> Beyond the known aleph null -
> Into the endless Everywhere -
> Burst, fire, and never ever fall:
>
> Spring into the eternal purpose
> And only then you can be free:>From magma's heart and into Cosmos -
>
> Intricate fire! Burn through me!
>
> Copyright Ilya Shambat, May 2007



blessed! - I've been reading it all morning. You know if we had an
automated uphill battle detection system, would it be heaven at last?

I believe that a good ac***ulation is having great questions at hand -
small, localized questions that lead to answers to great questions.

Methodology for example looks like instrumentation, which looks like
the phenomenon observed. By looking at the one's relation to
methodology people always protest at ignorance. Buy when a person is
describing or defining something we are struck to find a question
"Where do you see that?" fully blown into deep unknown.

I experienced an edgy tale of a journey especially around the
contextual offering of where it might be, what we may navigate, "a
night", "springing past a contruct", transfiguration", and I even
sensed an astronomical "ruler" as a mythological guidance.

But also I disliked it more than other poems. It is conflicting,
escaping, concerning. I am far removed from navigating a modest
journey through pluses and minuses into a "purpose".


I'm wondering what methodology the poet used to create assuredness of
the liberation. In my opinion it was a failure to ask for a purpose. I
witness such assuredness in the non-linearly opposite from the linear
road itself hence sensing a collapsing roof, or hard uncertain look
above a cliff hiding the midsection "midst".

Where do I see a one forest, one, here, from above so well?
 




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Intricate Fire
- <ilya_shambat2004@[E  2007-06-22 01:36:03 
Re: Intricate Fire
boson boss <junkerade@  2007-06-23 01:59:23 

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