Re: Temp Hack (c) 2007 Made in DNA

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It has a certain gritty texture to it, and a lovely rhythm that
reminded me of tapping fingers, with the occassional pause for breath
as the fingers hover over the keys.

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It's probably more interesting than demo allowed it to be...  If you
think about the person on the bed - what are they like, who are they?
The words describe something beyond themselves; the picture they paint
is something most men can identify with, I think.



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Cliche'd, obvious... but effective.  I'd agree with demo - it shows
the bits behind life.  Although I don't think hardbitten newsre****ters
talk like that...

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> HARDBOILED HAIKU
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My turn to go hmmm...  But I'm not a huge fan of Haiku, so perhaps it
is better than I think.