On 6 Apr 2007 16:31:24 -0700, "CoreyWhite" <CoreyWhite@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>
wrote:
>Backbone - The Plot
>
>The candidates for the next president are looming, and the story
>follows one of the Democratic nominee's who seemed to be our villain.
>In the beginning we find him talking on the phone to a man with an
>obscure east European accent. The man tells him that he can secure
>him as the democratic candidate for the presidency provided he can
>follow his instructions exactly. Meet him alone, outside of his
>building immediately. Then he instructs him to check his bank account
>because he will find $100,000,000 dollars that has been added to his
>account.
<snip>
Pffft, yer story sucks. I had a dream the other night which would
make a MUCH better story. Basically in the dream there was this guy
who wound up getting like super powers and was kinda siding towards
using them for evil. See the story would be realistic in that you
couldn't REALLY use the powers to "save the day" cause the likelihood
of ever really "getting there in the nick of time"...well that's just
not plausible. So in the story I figure I'd have him actually try and
do the whole "good guy" thing but then have it get all messed up cause
real life isn't like comic books. So then he'd be siding towards
evil, like in my dream, only the thing is, there's nothing really to
stop him. I mean he can do whatever he wants and there just isn't
anything that can really prevent him. So it winds up kinda making him
go insane a bit and he keeps like trying to get caught, but even when
he gets caught he gets bored and then pretty much just escapes from
jail without the slightest bit of effort. And so then I figured I'd
have him go REALLY insane to the point where he would like try to kill
himself...only then he'd find out that he can't. I figured I'd make
him super strong/impenetrable like Superman...only without the ability
to fly (so he couldn't just fly into the sun). Or I could make him
more like Vandal Savage (so he wouldn't be able to drown himself). So
then he would go REALLY crazy and would just start
killing...everybody. I'd have him like go through a town, walk up to
every person and just like start snapping their necks, one by one,
with nothing able to stop him. So then after killing off nearly all
teh people in some major city I'd have him like wandering through the
empty city full of dead people and then he would realize that if he
kept on killing everybody then there wouldn't be anybody left but him
and that, that would be an even WORSE fate, having to be alone for all
of eternity. So then after he has his epiphany...BOOM! A nuclear
bomb is dropped on the city...but does it actually kill him? Well,
that's for theoretical book number 2. ^_^
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Onideus Mad Hatter
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"You're only one of the best if you're striving to become one of the
best."
"I didn't make reality, Sun****ne, I just verbally ***** slapped you
with it."
"I'm not a professional, I'm an artist."
"Your Usenet blinders are my best friend."
"Usenet Filters - Learn to shut yourself the **** up!"
"Drugs killed Jesus you know...oh wait, no, that was the Jews, my
bad."
"There are clingy things in the grass...burrs 'n such...mmmm..."
"The more I learn the more I'm killing my idols."
"Is it wrong to incur and then use the hate ridden, vengeful stupidity
of complete strangers in random Usenet froups to further my art?"
"Freedom is only a concept, like race it's merely a social construct
that doesn't really exist outside of your ability to convince others
of its relevancy."
"Next time slow up a lil, then maybe you won't jump the gun and start
creamin yer panties before it's time to pop the champagne proper."
"Reality is directly pro****tionate to how creative you are."
"People are pretty ****ing high on themselves if they think that
they're just born with a soul. *snicker*...yeah, like they're just
givin em out for free."
"Quible, quible said the Hare. Quite a lot of quibling...everywhere.
So the Hare took a long stare and decided at best, to leave the rest,
to their merry little mess."
"There's a difference between 'bad' and 'so earth shatteringly
horrible it makes the angels scream in terror as they violently rip
their heads off, their blood spraying into the faces of a thousand
sweet innocent horrified children, who will forever have the terrible
images burned into their tiny little minds'."
"How sad that you're such a poor judge of style that you can't even
properly gauge the artistic worth of your own efforts."
"Those who record history are those who control history."
"I am the living embodiment of hell itself in all its tormentive rage,
endless suffering, unfathomable pain and unending horror...but you
don't get sent to me...I come for you."
"Ideally in a fight I'd want a BGM-109A with a W80 250 kiloton
tactical thermonuclear fusion based war head."
"Tell me, would you describe yourself more as a process or a
function?"
"Apparently this group has got the market cornered on stupid.
Intelligence is down 137 points across the board and the forecast
indicates an increase in Webtv users."
"Is my .sig delimiter broken? Really? You're sure? Awww,
gee...that's too bad...for YOU!" `, )
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